Miss Powell's New Car: If Cars Could Talk...

Assignment:
Pretend you are Miss Powell's new car. Write a story from the car's point of view.
(focus skills: voice and organization)

Ford Country
by Bryce

"Please don't pick me.  I want to stay on the dealer's lot", said the Mustang.

"Hey, you're lucky!  You get to go home", said the truck. 

Test driving was OK but people kept parking me.  I said  "Can you stop?  You keep turning me on and off."

I am automatic.  I have a phone in me.  I have shiny rims and tires.  Being a car is cool.  I am excited to go home with my new owner.

I Want To Go Home
by Taryn

I'm Miss Powell's car.  She bought me on sale.  I'm happy to be Miss Powell's car because she knows how to drive me and she knows my feelings. 

I really want to go home right now.  I have to stay here all day until it is 3:00 and that's too long.  I want to go home right now!  I feel like an old car waiting here until school is over at 3:00.

Shiny New Car
by Nathalie

I went home with Miss Powell.  I have nice rims, a Sync system, and leather seats.  My name is Mickey Mouse.  I like when she drives me because I look shiny.  I love everything about me because I am shiny.

Cool Car
by Nadia

People keep fiddling with me and I don't like that.  Plus, they drive me over night sometimes.  What I like about me is that I am popular. 

You won't find my things in regular cars.  I am pretty cool.  I have a built in phone, and when you sit on my seats your bottom can be warmed by a heater.  Like I said, I'm pretty cool!

Miss Powell's New Car
by Matt

Hi!  I am the Ford Edge.  Let me tell you a little story about myself.  I go very fast.  I can do a lot of cool stuff.  I can call anybody.  I have automatic seats.  Like I said, I do lots of cool stuff.

I just came from the dealership.  I am very shiny.  Miss Powell drives me a lot.  I am the coolest car ever!

The Best New Car
by Mark

I'm a Ford Edge and my name is Redbest Griffin.  I'm Miss Powell's new car.  I go 60 miles per hour.  That's so cool. I am the color light blue.

Miss Powell's New Car
by Logan

I am Miss Powell's new car.  I am a Ford Edge.  I love it that Miss Powell bought me when I was for sale.  She loves driving me.  I love when she drives me.  She is really good at driving.  She doesn't go over the speed limit and she listens to good stations on the radio.  It's fun when we drive together.

Miss Powell's Car
by Kobe

I am a car.  I have shiny tires, six seats, two sunroofs, and people inside me.  My trunk has bags and one box.  I have a steering wheel for people to drive me.  People love to drive me because they like me.  I am a fun car!

Miss Powell's New Car
by Kenneth

I am Miss Powell's new car.  The type of car I am is a Ford Edge.  I am very shiny and popular.  I have a leather automatic seat.  I have a cool sunroof!  The best thing about me is that I have shiny wheels.

Popular Car
by Kalob

I'm a popular car.  Everyone likes me.  Can't you see how shiny I am?  I can drive 100 m.p.h.  I have a Sync system and navigation.  I can park everywhere because I am popular.  My sunroof is shiny.  I can go on the highway.

New Car
by Josie

I like being a blue car.  I love that I go on streets.  Sometimes it tickles when I go through the car wash.  It feels good to be shiny and new.

Miss Powell's New Car
by Haylie

I am Zack.  I was sold by John at Ford Country.  I have shiny rims.  I have leather seats. 

I'm a popular car with 20 inch wheels.  Miss Powell drives me on the highway.

New Car
by Gabby

I'm Miss Powell's new car.  She bought me at Ford Country.  I'm really shiny.  I have heated leather seats and a sunroof.  I have a bumper that beeps when you get close to something.  I also have 20 inch wheels.  I think I'm the shiniest car in the world.

Miss Powell's New Car
by Ethan

I'm Miss Powell's car.  I have an automatic phone.  You don't need to use your hands for it.  You just say the person's name and I call for you. 

I have a navigation system that leads you where you need to go.  I have heated leather seats in case you get a cold bottom.  The best thing is how fast I go on the highway.

Ford Edge
by Erik

I'm a new car.  My name is Spike.  I used to live at Ford Country.  John sold me. 

I have a Sync system and a navigation system too!  I do not like it when I am parked.  I have 20 inch wheels and love to go fast!

Miss Powell Drove the Car
by Dave

Miss Powell bought me at Ford Country.  She presses all my buttons one at a time.  She puts on loud music and lets people get inside me.  I like when we drive around.  By the way, my name is Coolstine.

Ford Edge
by Chad

People keep saying I'm lucky and my miles are low.  I am so so so so so soooooooooooooooooooooo popular.

I have leather seats and my rims.... Don't even get me started with them!  They are 20 inches and very shiny.  My rims were the shiniest on the dealer's lot.  All the other cars want to be me!

Emily
by Cali

I am Emily.  I am a car.  I am Miss Powell's new Ford Edge!  She keeps turning me on when she gets ready to drive.  If people get my leather seats dirty I will leave.  I hate being dirty!

Miss Powell's New Car
by Anthony

Can't you see how shiny I am?  I am Tony. I am Miss Powell's new car.  I can go 120 miles per hour. 

Whenever I get dirty I go to the car wash.  Then I am shiny again. 

I like to go on the highway because I like to go fast!  I like it best when my sunroof is open and the stereo is blasting!

Ashley the Car
by Aalani

I have shiny rims and navigation.  I am popular.  I know how to drive fast.  I have heated leather seats and two sunroofs.  I like all my features.